Authors note- I was deciding whether or not to post this. It was from a while back when did a stream of consciousness. I have been trying to work on poetry so I would appreciate some feedback.
A long road
So straight and narrow
Goes through the forest
Full of trees and life
Spring is here
Bringing flowers and rain
Washing away the cold of winter
With the new April rains
Cars goes past
Gravel bouncing off the tires
And water splashing everywhere
The drivers without a care in the world
Kids come out
Onto the dusty road
With a ball and bat
To start a new game
I don't know if you meant this in a literal or metaphorical way but either way it was a poem that was easy to relate to and I think that was what made it good.
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